SPM 2022- EXTENDED WRITING 

3 questions/soalan – choose 1 question/pilih satu

Possible type of questions – article (artikel) / report (laporan) / review (ulasan) / story (cerita)

200-250 words /ppt

Total marks – 20 

35-40 minutes [suggested time]

Type / Jenis – Article / Artikel

Task / Tugasan – write an essay / menulis sebuah karangan

About / Tentang : school canteen / kantin sekolah

If you choose to answer this question :-

Use the 5 paragraph method

Give a suitable title

Write your name at the bottom end of the essay.

You need to write on changes that needs to be done to your school canteen.

Changes In Our School Canteen

First paragraph -Introduction

Paragraph 1 – what other types of food would you like to be served?

Paragraph 2- what special facilities should your canteen have?

Paragraph 3 – how can you improve your canteen?

Last paragraph-conclusion

Written by,

Azmi Harun

Outline / Rangka

Introduction / Pendahuluan    - [25 words] 

Point 1 + details / Poin 1 + huraian   - [40-50 words]

Point 2 + details / Poin 2 + huraian  - [40-50 words]

Point 3 + details / Poin 3 + huraian  - [40-50 words]

Conclusion / Penutup                        - [25 words]  

Suggestion :- for weak students I would suggest that you try to write within 200/210/215 words. This

 word limit is enough for you to fulfil the exam requirement. If you write less than 200 words, marks

 will be deducted.

Cadangan :- pelajar yang lemah dalam menulis karangan BI, kamu boleh tulis dalam linkungan

 200/210/215 patah perkataan. Had ini sudah mencukupi untuk memenuhi syarat peperiksaan.Kalau

 menulis kurang dari 200 patah perkataan, markah akan dipotong.

Changes In Our School Canteen

Our school canteen needs some changes. There are many ways we can make these changes. These changes can improve our school canteen. [22 words]

One way is, change the current menu to a new one. I would like to suggest that we introduce a new nutritious and healthy menu. The menu should be able to cater the vegetarian and non-vegetarian students. It must be affordable and taste good. Furthermore, counters selling healthy snacks, fruits and fruit drinks should be added. [56 words]

Other than that, I suggest some special facilities be added to the canteen. For example, water dispensers for students to refill their bottles during the day. Moreover, the canteen should provide enough space for students who are in wheelchairs to move around easily. [43 words]

Lastly, we can improve our canteen by keeping the service area clean and tidy. Plus, keep the whole canteen area and furniture around it clean and tidy. In addition, students can use a coupon system to buy their food rather than using cash. Finally, we can ask students to help decorate the canteen with art works, posters and signs. [59 words]

In conclusion, the school canteen plays a vital role in promoting healthy food and healthy eating habit among students. Students also can develop social  and companionship skills. [27 words]

Written by,

Azizul Harun                                                                       TOTAL WORDS = 207